SELF-EVALUATION: RESEARCH PROJECT

In my oral presentation I explained my research project is consist in "Apostacy in Islam" and I structerd in four parts.

1. What is the apostacy?
2. The punishment to apostacy
3.Many things about my religion: Islam
4. Interwied a Priest Mossèn Ferran and Oriol he is a boy was converted to islam.
5. Conclusion

I think about my presentation are good but my body language is a problem because when I explain the issue I moved always.
I think I have a good pronunciation but I'm person  I have a little mistakes. But for have good english I think a have study a lot and I return make a base.

About said me the classemates I speak good but I have correct my mistakes about the pronouns: who, what ..., because when is a person I make a what in versus who.